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Postby ehoeveler » Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:21 pm

Acrylic - Key West scene. Thanks, E
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Re: Feedback?

Postby Phil_B » Thu Feb 28, 2013 6:49 am

good work, keep going. next thing to do is the give the sea some movement.
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Postby Singular » Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:53 am

E, what a surprise. Didn't know you painted this type of stuff. It is coming together nicely. Like Phil said, now just bring the water to life and also take the clouds to the next level. This will turn out to be one heck of a painting.
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Postby kcortese » Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:06 pm

You are doing a fantastic job on this painting. I know it's a WIP, so follow Joe's advise and I'm sure it will be another great painting.

I like how you started the clouds, they already look like they are moving. I hope to someday be able to paint clouds, I always have a hard time with them.

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Postby nigelartist » Thu Feb 28, 2013 4:37 pm

kcortese wrote:You are doing a fantastic job on this painting. I know it's a WIP, so follow Joe's advise and I'm sure it will be another great painting.

I like how you started the clouds, they already look like they are moving. I hope to someday be able to paint clouds, I always have a hard time with them.

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Try using toilet paper...don't laugh...scrunch up the paper and dab the colour around!
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Postby nigelartist » Thu Feb 28, 2013 4:39 pm

Great scene E. I agree with others though that the sea needs some movement as the clouds are dominating the scene right now.

Also, the shy above the flag looks a bit 'brushy'.

Still, as I say, a great artwork!
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Postby ehoeveler » Thu Feb 28, 2013 4:45 pm

Thank You so much, everyone!
I do agree with all feedback - am working on clouds and water.
The water is tough! Thanks again, E
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Postby kcortese » Fri Mar 01, 2013 7:36 am

Niegel, I will try the toilet paper for clouds, I'll experiment with it.

Thank you for the tip.

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Postby nigelartist » Fri Mar 01, 2013 2:17 pm

My pleasure!
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