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My first try at oil Painting

Postby vijart » Tue Jun 12, 2012 1:16 am

This is my first try at oil Painting
http://www.asingularcreation.com/Gallery/displayimage.php?album=2679&pid=50499#top_display_media
I would really love some advise on improving my art.
Thanks and regards.
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Re: My first try at oil Painting

Postby Singular » Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:48 pm

Pretty damn good for your first oil. You are on the right track. Keep working on it. I think you have some talent. The detail and lighting is very good. You can work on varying the tones from the background to the foreground so that everything does not have the same value.
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Re: My first try at oil Painting

Postby Kristian_Saapunki » Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:15 am

Impressive! Agree whit Singular. Would prefer a little more color tones. Especially in the bushes on the right. On the whole, well done!
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Re: My first try at oil Painting

Postby ninuca » Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:11 am

wonderful colors - I like it very much. I know the difficulty at oil painting, so it's wonderfully done
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Re: My first try at oil Painting

Postby jenn_iam » Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:17 pm

Really good for a first try... I like the impressionistic feel... color choices are appealing as well. Agree with above comments, be mindful of tones and values. nature has many variety, dont be afraid to show them in your work as well. :)
May your world be painted in the Brightest of colors!

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(All mediums; Conceptual Design, Costume Creation, to Application)
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Re: My first try at oil Painting

Postby Drey » Fri Jul 27, 2012 8:46 am

It's quite an impressive piece of artwork)) My favourite part is the river, I love the motion, the reflexion of the sunlight and the sweeping shadows of the trees)) it's simply brilliant))
Keep up the nice work)))
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