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Mountain Glory

Postby Nexa » Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:02 pm

Hi, comments will be much appreciated.
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Re: Mountain Glory

Postby Singular » Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:41 pm

Hi Nicole,

The mountain looks good. I would say that the trees and grass get lost. They seem to be a bit blurred into the bottom of the mountains and have no definition. I would work on separating the values a bit more so that the objects in the foreground stand out. Overall, nice work.

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Re: Mountain Glory

Postby Nexa » Sat Jan 21, 2012 4:16 am

Hi Joe,

Thanx for the comment and the suggestion, my intension was for the grass and trees to get lost as the main focus was to be the mountain with the grass only to add some color like when focus a camera on a specific object and the rest around it just a vague blurr. Will definitely keep you suggestion in mind for my next mountain painting.

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Re: Mountain Glory

Postby jenn_iam » Tue Jan 31, 2012 3:32 pm

Hi Nexa,
I have to agree with Joe on the Trees comment. Also, watch the perspective... trees closer to the viewer should appear larger/taller, but base placement should also be lower. Im having trouble with the worn tree in the far left and the lone tall tree in the center.
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