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This is a forum where you can post your art work and ask what the world thinks. I am looking for general feedback, nothing too technical. A push in the right direction would be appreciated.

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two girls

Postby mfboyd » Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:46 pm

just trying to get something done, critiques appreciated.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:42 pm

This is re: the top one which is more successful as a whole in my opinion. I really like her hair and you're good with eyes. And have a good grip on light and shadow on the face. Her hand is sketchy, but it looks as though the work is not completed yet. Her neck and the sternocleidomastoid muscle needs to be better developed through gradual shading. All in all you have all you need to become a very good portraitist.
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