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Postby tdiva » Sun Jun 21, 2009 4:28 pm

Hello,

Please send your feedback about the art work attached. Tell me if you like and if you don't, please tell me why not. I've been drawing and painting for a long time. I've developed my own technique of doing portraits with image enhancement.

Thank you,
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Postby demac » Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:16 pm

I like it but the cheeks are off one is rounded and one is chiseled cheekbone, the eyes nose and mouth are fantastic !!!!!

Also the forehead is the same

Left rounded right taut (is that spelt right???) anyhow let me know what techniques you use

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Postby tdiva » Mon Jun 22, 2009 12:19 pm

Thanks Deanne,

I guess I have to work on the simmetry of my images :D .
My technique is simple, I try to do mixed media, pen, pencil, watercolor, anything will do. It makes the image more interesting, in my opinion.

Thanks again for taking the time to review my artwork.

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Postby BYart » Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:16 pm

Hi tdiva! And welcome as I see this is your first posting!
I like your image alot!
I also am going to try my hand at mixed media soon, so it was doubly interesting to view your work. Thanks for posting and hope to see more soon!
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Postby tdiva » Thu Jun 25, 2009 12:01 pm

Thank you, Barb!

I'm happy you like my artwork! :D
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Postby saphyre » Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:58 pm

This is really interesting! I'd love to see the image more centered so we can see more of the "hair". I also think that the eyes could use a little more detail, not much but just enough to give it some more life. I do agree about the symetry but that is easy to fix. What kind of paper or boarding is this on, it has a texture to it or is that just because of how you had to load it? This is s great piece and welcome to the site!
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Postby tdiva » Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:35 pm

Thank you Saphire.

The paper is a primed sheet suplied by Crimson & Blake that I really recommend to all artists. It can be used with any medium, it's acid free and has acrylic gesso on it. It feels like canvas but it's paper.
The image is centered and maybe I should have done the drawing more in the middle of the paper.
Thank you again for your coments and views. They are much appreciatted. :D
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Postby krysta11 » Sun Jun 28, 2009 8:22 pm

Hello tdiva,

This is really interesting piece of art. I am very impressed.
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Postby tdiva » Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:32 pm

Thank you Krista,
Coments like yours are a huge incentive for me! I'm glad you like it.

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Postby orbsear » Mon Jul 20, 2009 8:24 pm

I like it being off center and love the hair gives it movement but a feeling of being in thought. The cheeks being different gives it expression.
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