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Postby LeahW » Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:30 am

I'd like some constructive feedback on this painting. I'd appreciate any help I could get.
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Postby bergina » Sat Apr 05, 2008 6:31 pm

Make it bigger so I can see it.
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Postby Singular » Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:35 am

I do wish the image was a bit larger. But from what I see, you did a very good job with the perspective and design. The color is also nice. However, the objects seem to compete a bit too much with each other due to the fact that you placed the same value for everything.

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Value--detail

Postby BAReam » Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:32 pm

I really like the subject here. I would have to agree that the values are a bit too uniform, but tends to make the atmosphere very warm and inviting. The value issues might be counter balanced by intensely developing detail in the foreground.

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Re: roman street

Postby rips10 » Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:20 am

[quote="LeahW"]I'd like some constructive feedback on this painting. I'd appreciate any help I could get.
thanks,
leah[/img][/quote)
I think you should check the rightside(front building) of the drawing again,And distans should be little faded I mean not that vidual.Any way your work is very skilled work.Best of luck.
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Postby Blayne » Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:37 am

Very beautiful! Since you obviously have kept strictly to the rules of perspective (good job!) check the vertical white line of the doorway to the right--it's angled a bit instead of straight vertical.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Mon Apr 21, 2008 11:32 am

Blayne wrote:Very beautiful! Since you obviously have kept strictly to the rules of perspective (good job!) check the vertical white line of the doorway to the right--it's angled a bit instead of straight vertical.


I agree. It looks as though the building is about to collapse because of it. Other than that, it's very nice and colourful.
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Postby candragon » Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:53 pm

The colours are strong... liking the intensity of the blue sky :) Could maybe darken the foreground more to push the background away a bit. Its very well down and a strong piece. I like it.
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