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[ehoeveler]

Acrylic - Key West scene. Thanks, E

[Phil_B]

good work, keep going. next thing to do is the give the sea some movement.

[Singular]

E, what a surprise. Didn't know you painted this type of stuff. It is coming together nicely. Like Phil said, now just bring the water to life and also take the clouds to the next level. This will turn out to be one heck of a painting.

[kcortese]

You are doing a fantastic job on this painting. I know it's a WIP, so follow Joe's advise and I'm sure it will be another great painting.

I like how you started the clouds, they already look like they are moving. I hope to someday be able to paint clouds, I always have a hard time with them.

Karen

[nigelartist]

You are doing a fantastic job on this painting. I know it's a WIP, so follow Joe's advise and I'm sure it will be another great painting.

I like how you started the clouds, they already look like they are moving. I hope to someday be able to paint clouds, I always have a hard time with them.

Karen

Try using toilet paper...don't laugh...scrunch up the paper and dab the colour around!

[nigelartist]

Great scene E. I agree with others though that the sea needs some movement as the clouds are dominating the scene right now.

Also, the shy above the flag looks a bit 'brushy'.

Still, as I say, a great artwork!

[ehoeveler]

Thank You so much, everyone!
I do agree with all feedback - am working on clouds and water.
The water is tough! Thanks again, E

[kcortese]

Niegel, I will try the toilet paper for clouds, I'll experiment with it.

Thank you for the tip.

Karen

[nigelartist]

My pleasure!