Within The Stars

[Dragondust]

decided to change the title!

[jenn_iam]

looking good

[ehoeveler]

Before you get too much into it, let me suggest that you shorten the ballerina's left arm a bit and move the shoulder 'bump' a little more towards her neck - not too much more, just a little and continue to work on her hand. I love her pose and the legs look great! Thank You, E

[Dragondust]

so...I redid everything...

[rhknigh]

Great process, I enjoy seeing how beautiful art comes to be.

[Dragondust]

Great process, I enjoy seeing how beautiful art comes to be.

Very nice of you ..Thank you!

[jenn_iam]

Nice changes. I like the direction your going

[Dragondust]

Thanks...here is a little more...[

[ehoeveler]

Oh, how Pretty. Looking good! Thank You, E

[NoreenTorelli]

Awesome job with the dancer and the sky! I'm curious about where you are going with the purple pathway though. It looks to be just *slightly* tilted forward and warps the perspective. I might suggest moving the top edge of the purple down slightly. It might help. ^_^

[Dragondust]

Thanks...ya I need to fix the pathway...thanks for the tip!

[NoreenTorelli]

Thanks...ya I need to fix the pathway...thanks for the tip!

My pleasure!

[Dragondust]

ok I think this is the final version...

[ehoeveler]

This is coming along nicely! I like the shading in your purple stones (be sure to shade parts of the path for some added depth) along with the action of flower pods coming off of that tree. Thank You, E