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Postby Dragondust » Mon Feb 17, 2014 9:45 pm

decided to change the title!

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Re: Within The Stars

Postby jenn_iam » Mon Feb 17, 2014 11:51 pm

looking good :)
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby ehoeveler » Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:52 am

Before you get too much into it, let me suggest that you shorten the ballerina's left arm a bit and move the shoulder 'bump' a little more towards her neck - not too much more, just a little and continue to work on her hand. I love her pose and the legs look great! Thank You, E
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby Dragondust » Fri Feb 21, 2014 8:30 pm

so...I redid everything...

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Postby rhknigh » Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:09 pm

Great process, I enjoy seeing how beautiful art comes to be.
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Postby Dragondust » Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:19 pm

rhknigh wrote:Great process, I enjoy seeing how beautiful art comes to be.

Very nice of you ..Thank you!
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby jenn_iam » Sat Feb 22, 2014 11:51 pm

Nice changes. I like the direction your going
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby Dragondust » Fri Feb 28, 2014 7:29 pm

Thanks...here is a little more...[

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Re: Within The Stars

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Mar 01, 2014 2:45 am

Oh, how Pretty. Looking good! Thank You, E
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby NoreenTorelli » Sun Mar 02, 2014 5:15 pm

Awesome job with the dancer and the sky! I'm curious about where you are going with the purple pathway though. It looks to be just *slightly* tilted forward and warps the perspective. I might suggest moving the top edge of the purple down slightly. It might help. ^_^
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby Dragondust » Sun Mar 02, 2014 7:07 pm

Thanks...ya I need to fix the pathway...thanks for the tip!
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby NoreenTorelli » Mon Mar 03, 2014 4:00 am

Dragondust wrote:Thanks...ya I need to fix the pathway...thanks for the tip!


My pleasure!
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Re: Within The Stars

Postby Dragondust » Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:22 pm

ok I think this is the final version...

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Re: Within The Stars

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Mar 08, 2014 8:29 pm

This is coming along nicely! I like the shading in your purple stones (be sure to shade parts of the path for some added depth) along with the action of flower pods coming off of that tree. Thank You, E
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