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Postby feremiev » Mon May 28, 2012 5:22 pm

Here are some of my new works, all of them are digital, im really bad to give any description, so i better let you interpret it as you wish.
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Postby feremiev » Mon May 28, 2012 5:26 pm

here are more
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Postby feremiev » Mon May 28, 2012 5:29 pm

and the last one
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Re: a bunch of new works

Postby jenn_iam » Wed May 30, 2012 7:35 pm

I have to say the Last one is my favorite. While you have a decent idea of concept.. I would say Depth is the one main area that needs work. Proportions and Foreshortening second. The images are a little on the flat side. Really work your tones to bring out the highs and lows of your figure. Keep it up! :)
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Postby SidneyEileen » Thu May 31, 2012 2:23 pm

You have a definite coherent style to all of them, but they would all benefit from an in-depth study of anatomy. Even if true realism is not your goal, having a firm foundational understanding of anatomy, foreshortening, proportions, shading, etc. will allow you to deviate from reality in a way that works with the artwork instead of distracting from it.
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Re: a bunch of new works

Postby feremiev » Thu May 31, 2012 10:55 pm

thanks both of you, im really taking into consideration your observations, im going to studing art formally but right now i just learn from trial and error, so i appreciate your feed back.
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Postby jenn_iam » Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:53 pm

Sounds like you have a strategy.. if in the meantime, want to still get the practices in there, check out some anatomy books or figure drawing books from the local Library.. then use magazine clips to practice drawing the real form. Good luck.. Cant wait to see how you progress! :)
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Re: a bunch of new works

Postby feremiev » Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:58 pm

Thanks, here is a new one i made, i tried to put more depht in it, also used varius photos of real wather to achieve this efect.
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