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Postby Erika Takacs » Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:36 pm

I thought this was a perfect title, but open to suggestions if you have a better one. I can't decide on colour, I might keep it white, depending how it will look when it dries. Hope it's not cheesy, if it is, I want to know.
Thanks for looking, and looking forward to your comments.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:37 pm

More angles.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:39 pm

Last one.
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Postby arlynnhr » Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:49 pm

Hey, this is an interesting piece! I really like it.
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Postby nigelartist » Thu Jul 24, 2008 4:53 pm

Lovely!

Very romantic and I don't see any eroticism at all!

What about...

'Don't Let Anything Get Between your Love!'

Does anyone know John Foxx original singer with Ultravox? There is a reason for this!
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Postby krysta11 » Thu Jul 24, 2008 5:57 pm

Erika I love this piece very much. Don't leave it white. I would give them body color and different colors for hair. You have better and better ideas. Wonderful work my friend.
I think Nigel's suggestion about title is perfect.
all the best krysta
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:04 pm

A good work. I would give the figures color. The base perhaps black. and the stick a wood color.
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Postby DLKeur » Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:48 pm

I would leave it alabaster. Excellent, excellent, excellent. LEAVE IT PURE WHITE.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Fri Jul 25, 2008 6:33 am

Thank you everyone for your comments. From what I hear it seems to me I pulled it off ok. I like Nigel's title, but it's a bit long. Same idea but shorter? I don't know that song, what's the reason?
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Postby nigelartist » Fri Jul 25, 2008 7:20 am

Steadfast Love

Tenacious Infatuation

Tenacious Romance

Tenacious Passion
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Postby krysta11 » Fri Jul 25, 2008 8:33 am

Nigel
avo! Great variety of titles and all go with E. piece.
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Postby krysta11 » Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:19 am

I am trying to write to you E. and have a lot of problem with the connection
every 2 minutes it says Network time out. We had very heavy rain yesterday and maybe this is a reason for bad connection. I will try tomorrow.
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Postby bpier » Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:52 pm

It's a great piece.

Entwined
passion
paridise
lovers
desire.

As for color, being the trditionalist that I am, I would love to see this in a
oze color, but thats just me. :D

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Postby Erika Takacs » Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:51 pm

Thanks Brian. Lots of great ideas for title, but I want something very basic yet powerful. The two opposites becoming one for a second. Entwined is close, but still not simple enough. How does "Becoming One" or even a simple "One" sound?

I may need to go with
onze if I can't get rid of the rusty stain on their head from the armature wire.
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Postby nigelartist » Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:01 pm

Cyber Lovers

Merged Cyber Lovers

Merged Cyber Lovers Not Wanting A Menage a Trois

Cyber Lovers Oblivious

Passionate Cyber Lovers



CYBER LOVERS
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Postby bpier » Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:29 pm

ONE......love it. :D

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Postby Erika Takacs » Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:44 pm

nigelartist wrote:Cyber Lovers

Merged Cyber Lovers

Merged Cyber Lovers Not Wanting A Menage a Trois

Cyber Lovers Oblivious

Passionate Cyber Lovers



CYBER LOVERS


Nigel, maybe for another piece.
'One' it is then Brian.
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Postby BAReam » Sat Aug 02, 2008 6:04 am

Hi Ericka... very nice piece... kind of reminds me of a couple VERY early Brancuzzi. I have to agree with dawn on color... simplicity is a major element for this piece.

all the best... Bruce
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Postby Erika Takacs » Sat Aug 02, 2008 6:18 am

BAReam wrote:Hi Ericka... very nice piece... kind of reminds me of a couple VERY early Brancuzzi. I have to agree with dawn on color... simplicity is a major element for this piece.

all the best... Bruce


Thanks, Bruce. Do you mean Brancusi? I haven't see his early works, only his abstracts. I have to look.
Well, I found out later that the wire armature should have been sealed. It stained the back of his head. I'll try and add more mache to cover it when it's completely dry. Hope it helps because I agree with Dawn and you too about colour.
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Postby dianapotts » Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:35 pm

Hi Erika! This piece is so elegant and captures the beauty of being loving. "The Strength of Love" is what I would call it. Diana
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