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Postby goldenvenus » Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:25 am

Hi im new to this website and whanted to know what you guys thought about my drawing.
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Postby nigelartist » Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:24 am

Well welcome to ASC.

The best site I've been on and the people are great.

This is a site for REAL artists.

Your sketch is excellent...as smooth as the proverbial silk.

ACE!
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Postby karate0kat » Wed Jul 16, 2008 4:16 pm

Hi, I'm new here too *waves*

I really like the texture of the hair. Hair can be tricky but I think overall you did a really good job. I might work a little on the hair line, where the hair ends. It seems a little a
upt.

The left eye (er, our left, her right) seems a bit far away from the
idge of the nose. Her eyes would be very very far apart if she was looking straight on. And I think your neck might be a bit too thick.

Other than those few proportional issues I think this is a very good drawing. I have a soft spot for faces since I taught myself to draw looking at portraits of people. This one's not perfect but it shows definite potential.
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Postby goldenvenus » Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:10 am

nigelartist wrote:Well welcome to ASC.

The best site I've been on and the people are great.

This is a site for REAL artists.

Your sketch is excellent...as smooth as the proverbial silk.

ACE!


thanks have been looking for a site like this its cool to have a site just for art.
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Postby goldenvenus » Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:43 pm

karate0kat wrote:Hi, I'm new here too *waves*

I really like the texture of the hair. Hair can be tricky but I think overall you did a really good job. I might work a little on the hair line, where the hair ends. It seems a little a
upt.

The left eye (er, our left, her right) seems a bit far away from the
idge of the nose. Her eyes would be very very far apart if she was looking straight on. And I think your neck might be a bit too thick.

Other than those few proportional issues I think this is a very good drawing. I have a soft spot for faces since I taught myself to draw looking at portraits of people. This one's not perfect but it shows definite potential.



Hey thanks i dint notice the eye distance at first but now i do and i will shurely work on the hair line it gives me trouble sometimes jejeje.
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