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Postby IRMA BACKELANT » Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:03 pm

very interesting and intriguing but I don't know what the focal point is. My eye is traveling too much to rest on one spot and subjects are competing with each other, Sometimes less is more and I think the pharoh has the most impact and perhaps you should make him the focal point. The sun could be diminished in the background and not be same size or as
ight of colors with head. Simplify for greater impact.
Like the surreal effect.
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Postby ehoeveler » Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:08 pm

Picture not coming up. Are you re-loading? E
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Postby Singular » Mon Nov 26, 2007 10:52 pm

I think Irma was critiquing a painting by Tintefaust and posted a new topic instead of replying. The original topic is here: http://asingularcreation.com/Forums/vie ... php?t=1467

just a guess.
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Postby tintefaust » Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:11 pm

thanks for your help irma, I appreciate the feedback :)
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