honest feedback please

[sylvian1970]

please give me an honest opinion

[sylvian1970]

ok that bad i guess,:(

[Singular]

I do not think this is bad at all. Actually like a lot about it. The colors and design are very good. My main complaint is the cleanliness of the lines and the squiggles. The background is very nice. I think the squiggles take away from that. The focal area looks to be a bit rushed. The lines are not as clean as I would like and the colors appear a bit smeared rather than blended. But there is a lot of potential here. Nice work overall.

[sylvian1970]

ty so much for your honest feedback, this really helps me learn. It was all done with a knife and just smearing paint. However, i struggled, personally i dont like it at all, my husband loves it, i have no idea why. I guess each to their own. I told him, i dont wish to list this for sale and actually was going to throw it out. He insisted i dont lol, I have no idea if i can even fix it, its just one i cannot even look at, haha it infuriates me actually.

[jenn_iam]

Hi Sylvian, I really like the marriage between the geometric to the abstract colors... I am not a fan of the drip-swirls so much, but do very much like the radiating hues in the background contrasting against the more solid tones in the shapes.