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Space Fantasy

Postby Mandevu » Wed Oct 09, 2019 5:32 pm

Corel Painter + Wacom tablet.
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Re: Space Fantasy

Postby Singular » Fri Oct 11, 2019 6:09 pm

Pretty good. My main complaint is that everything is the same value. It is very hard to distinguish between anything because of that. You need to soften up and give less detail to the objects in the background and provide extra detail to the focal area.
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Re: Space Fantasy

Postby Mandevu » Sat Oct 12, 2019 3:26 pm

Good point! I'm going to play around with your recommendation to see if I can improve it. Thanks for your feedback Joe.
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Re: Space Fantasy

Postby Mandevu » Tue Oct 15, 2019 3:54 pm

Here's a version amended to reflect your comments Joe. In order to get the different values you suggested I changed color as well as background focus. Must admit I was loath to blur my background (after spending so much time on it). Nevertheless I find the result more pleasing. :lol:
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