A Singular Creation Art Community
promoting and showcasing all types of art and photography

I can't figure out what I've done wrong here?

If you want real feedback on your work and don't mind people telling you their opinions, this is the spot for you.

Moderator: Moderators

I can't figure out what I've done wrong here?

Postby pandybear » Wed Nov 20, 2019 8:26 am

I have been working on this piece for a while now. I've hit a bump and can't figure out what's wrong with the section that has the puddle. I can't seem to put my finger on it on how to make it look right...the whole section there. Any ideas would be appreciated! :)
Attachments
pandybear
 
Posts: 2
Joined: Wed Nov 20, 2019 8:17 am

Re: I can't figure out what I've done wrong here?

Postby www-ksart-se » Wed Nov 20, 2019 2:46 pm

I dont know. Maby try to blend it to gether a bit. It dosent look natural whit that hard grass line. Add a little texture to the ground.
Thats what I would try atleast.
User avatar
www-ksart-se
 
Posts: 390
Joined: Sat Jul 07, 2012 3:06 am
Location: Sweden
Gallery: View Gallery

Re: I can't figure out what I've done wrong here?

Postby pandybear » Wed Nov 20, 2019 3:38 pm

I will try this, adding texture. Thank you for the help! :)
pandybear
 
Posts: 2
Joined: Wed Nov 20, 2019 8:17 am

Re: I can't figure out what I've done wrong here?

Postby AegisFuzzy » Tue Dec 03, 2019 1:57 pm

Water doesnt normally ripple from the middle without reason. Just add stronger definition along the edges, and reflections. Here is an example, ignore the red forgot to change color
https://www.deviantart.com/aegisfuzzy/a ... -822317145
Sorry i havent figured out how to link from DA to here.
AegisFuzzy
 
Posts: 10
Joined: Tue Dec 03, 2019 9:56 am
Location: CherryPoint NC


  • Similar topics
    Replies
    Views
    Author

Return to I Am Ready For The Fury

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests

cron