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No, please. I welcome this! I always have friends and family tell me good things, but never a seasoned artist tell me what I should hear, and I think that's the issue. Please, tell me what needs improvement, specifically in this painting.

Thank you, so much, for your critiques. I guess I forgot to add the title and description, but the painting is called ,"Stalemate" It's a painting of two sperm being denied the right to move toward an already fertilized zygote going through mitosis. What could I do to refine the demi-rounds. Lately, I've really struggled with painting with looseness. When I look at my work, I almost feel like, sometimes, it's too controlled, that I aim for perfection instead of authenticity and emotion.