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comic project ( knights chronicles)

Postby nightmarefang » Sat Nov 19, 2016 9:50 pm

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the cover art to the first book in my comic series Knights chronicles, please check out the full comic on my site http://nagylouis.wixsite.com/full-moon-stories , then tell me what you think
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Re: comic project ( knights chronicles)

Postby CarlOwen » Sun Nov 20, 2016 8:46 pm

Good evening. Looked at your site. I cannot read the text on each page fast enough before the next page flips up. So, after the third page I just clicked out. In the real world a person reads at about 250 words a minute. Add pictures and you add visual input time that is much longer than you allow. Do the research. The drawings lack the polish of a real comic book. I don't believe rough drawings are good enough to tell the story. Don't know about the story line because like I said, I just clicked out.
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Re: comic project ( knights chronicles)

Postby nightmarefang » Mon Nov 21, 2016 7:06 pm

i think the gallery i put it in is on auto sorry about that,and thanks for telling me my art needs a bit of polish , thank you for the input
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Re: comic project ( knights chronicles)

Postby CarlOwen » Mon Nov 21, 2016 7:29 pm

You are welcome. Wish you the best.
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Re: comic project ( knights chronicles)

Postby nightmarefang » Fri Dec 09, 2016 10:06 pm

i was able to fix some of the issues to the site so if that flops http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/kn ... e_no=34120 try that one
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Re: comic project ( knights chronicles)

Postby CarlOwen » Sat Dec 10, 2016 9:14 am

Better, I had time to read and scroll through the work. Kind of looks like a story board. You need to recheck you spelling. I wish you well with this sci-fi work.
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