Plumaria bloom: need a little critique

[kennethnewsom]

This is a piece I am currently working on of a plumaria flower and just wanting a little critique before going further??

Thanks,
Kenneth Ray Newsom

[Singular]

Very nice progress. Looks like all you really need to do is finishing touches. Do your final highlights and dark tones to add more depth, and do a little tidying up with some clean lines around the stems and flowers.