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Postby Matt LaCross » Sat Dec 01, 2007 5:25 pm

Hello everyone,

Here is another new image that I just finished. Something a bit new for me. What do you think?

Take care,

Matt

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Postby ehoeveler » Sat Dec 01, 2007 5:58 pm

Really good but the space to the left bothered me
so I put in a little something. Hope you don't mind. E
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Postby DLKeur » Sat Dec 01, 2007 9:11 pm

I like it. It's got passion and flare. It's minimalist, yet casual, and very very modern.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:14 pm

Matt, I like the curved shape very much. I'm missing something in the upper left square, a little too much white space. How about a single vertical line to fill it out slightly?
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Postby Carmelo » Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:16 pm

It's a good one Matt. The shape suggests a movement not unlike an undulation within the realm of yin and yang.
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Postby Singular » Thu Dec 13, 2007 3:13 pm

Irma accidentally posted her reply as a new topic. So here it is:

IRMA BACKELANT wrote:I like the use of negative and positive space - but title is misleading - not a single line. I would try putting the division of bl and wh at a diagonal ( corner to corner) to separate the bl and wh. found the squares too busy and detracted from flow of "single Line" of your piece. Very nicely done but a little busy.
good luck!
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