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Postby BiJian » Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:17 pm

Paper sculpture.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:24 pm

Cool.
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Very nice.

Postby Matt LaCross » Thu Nov 15, 2007 6:25 pm

That is a beautiful image. What medium is that. Do you have some more?
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Postby ehoeveler » Fri Nov 16, 2007 4:57 am

Bijan, it's a lovely idea but not one of my faves; The birds are
too close to the sun and I don't like the progression of the flying birds.
To me the semi-circle of birds looks contrived, not natural.
The actual birds, sun and sky look crisp and lovely, as always.
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Postby BiJian » Fri Nov 16, 2007 12:37 pm

Thanks for the critique, good points. By the way, it's a nest not Sun,
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Postby ehoeveler » Fri Nov 16, 2007 5:54 pm

Oops! Please excuse me, B. E
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Bird's nest soup

Postby Carmelo » Fri Nov 16, 2007 10:04 pm

I like the color contrast B. I got the bird's nest right off, yet the formation of the birds could do with an adjust. Still love your swans. On second thought, are the birds actually one and this is the journey home?
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Postby BiJian » Sat Nov 17, 2007 12:27 am

There are 7 birds (cranes) presented in a shadowbox frame.

Thanks for all critiquing
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