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Queen all tarted up and ready for an outing...

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Sep 04, 2015 10:30 pm

Who knows how that will go...? Enjoy! E
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Re: Queen all tarted up and ready for an outing...

Postby CarlOwen » Sat Sep 12, 2015 5:41 pm

Been looking at this a while. I have decided you lost the vibrancy when you darkened it. However, I think you have an opportunity to bring it back to life. I suggest you lightly brush a slightly lighter hue of yellow on the forehead, upper chest and part of that wing shoulder. I also suggest you change the title to something along the line of "Look out world! I am here!" or, "Listen Up, I have arrived". I have changed titles on many of my paintings many times, and, oh my, because someone suggested a better one than I originally gave it.
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Re: Queen all tarted up and ready for an outing...

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Sep 12, 2015 6:22 pm

No. The title means what it means - why does everybody say I give poor titles?
You and my Seester. Thank you for the idea of white/yellow for those parts - Excellent idea. E
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Re: Queen all tarted up and ready for an outing...

Postby CarlOwen » Sun Sep 13, 2015 6:18 am

You are welcome Elizabeth. I will be doing yard work today. I am good for abut four to six hours of work these days. Hope to do some painting this afternoon.
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