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Marilyn Monroe WIP sketch

Postby mcsarah17 » Tue Jun 03, 2014 4:13 pm

In the middle of this Marilyn Monroe sketch, what do you think?
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Re: Marilyn Monroe WIP sketch

Postby Gosia » Tue Jun 03, 2014 10:39 pm

Hi, I am not the expert, but I was also drawing Marilyn recently. :-) I like your happy portrait of Marilyn and it seems to me that the most of the details look good. :-) But I think that there is a small difference in the shape of her chin, in the shape of the right part of her nose and apple of the eye should be a little bit bigger (less white on the bottom) - comparing to this photo: http://femmeducoupe.com/wp-content/uplo ... inking.jpg
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Re: Marilyn Monroe WIP sketch

Postby ehoeveler » Wed Jun 04, 2014 7:33 pm

Very Good, Malgorzata! Sarah, I would also add that the folds between her lip and nose are a little too deep.
I do think you have her expression down beautifully, the eyes are gorgeous and her overall essence is pure Marilyn.
Loving it. Thank You, E
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Re: Marilyn Monroe WIP sketch

Postby mcsarah17 » Thu Jun 05, 2014 3:03 pm

Thank you both! I am working on it again today and will post another follow up pic soon. Love the encouragement :)
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