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Obsession of Innocence

Postby Dragondust » Sun Sep 22, 2013 5:44 pm

any suggestions?

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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby ehoeveler » Sun Sep 22, 2013 6:05 pm

No other suggestions than the ones I already put forth.
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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby Dragondust » Sun Sep 22, 2013 9:42 pm

so I know I have a ways to go on this one still but here is some progress.. it's all I'm doing for tonight..lol

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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby Dragondust » Mon Sep 23, 2013 7:52 pm

more progress....

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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby ehoeveler » Tue Sep 24, 2013 1:21 am

I like how you've made the wing fluffy like her hair - I like that look!
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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby nigelartist » Wed Sep 25, 2013 1:40 pm

Looking good. Love the colour usage. Can I suggest that scrunched up toilet paper is also good for 'fluffy' paintwork.

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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby Dragondust » Fri Sep 27, 2013 11:06 pm

ok....a little more progress!

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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Sep 27, 2013 11:10 pm

Yes, I see that you've fixed her nose - looks much better - and changed the part in her hair. I also notice more definition in her hair strands. Keep up the good work! Thank You, E
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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby rhknigh » Sat Sep 28, 2013 8:11 am

The wing has lost its immediate impact of being a feathered wing to me since you began. It could be a fluffy boa now. Was that your intent? I would suggest making the feathers more distinctive if you want someone seeing the completed piece for the first time to get that it is a wing right off. Great work all and all, just a quick impression about the feathers. Maybe it looks different in person.
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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby Dragondust » Wed Oct 02, 2013 7:56 pm

ok re-thinking the wing

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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby rhknigh » Wed Oct 02, 2013 8:40 pm

Very distinctive!
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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Oct 03, 2013 12:01 am

I like this journey with the wing - interested to see how it will turn out. Thank You, E
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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby Vincent Vandali » Fri Oct 04, 2013 12:12 am

Hey......

The stages of completion show a maturity in the work. It is very vivid and deserves the kudos im
willing to give it.....Good Job!

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Re: Obsession of Innocence

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Oct 04, 2013 7:50 pm

Let me suggest that you even up the black appliques around her eyes...maybe add some little stones because the black alone is too harsh.
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