by wiloberdier » Sat Jul 13, 2013 11:17 am
You did an excellent job with retaining a likeness. I do think that with the brim of the hat a cast shadow upon his face and more modeling from light to dark would put him more n the scene. Also proportions seem a bit off as far as his head size. The upper right side of the frame is stifling the flow and seems too much of an equilateral to work in your design.
Very nice technique. Excellent painting skills. Good luck.