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Postby Steve01982 » Mon Nov 12, 2012 9:06 pm

Something new
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Re: new

Postby ehoeveler » Tue Nov 13, 2012 12:34 am

Hi, Steve! Of course I'm lovin' the burn theme but
I'm wondering why your brick wall doesn't reach the
bottom of the picture. Your Girl is tragically lovely
but her left eye seems a bit too far off from her nose,
the center point. Now, this is just a personal observation
but I would love to see just a little more shading and
definition with her lips and nose. 'Best, E.
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Re: new

Postby Amigone » Thu Nov 15, 2012 1:25 pm

I really like the lips in this actually and the nose is much better here. Are you trying to go for something closer to realism? do you work with guidelines when drawing faces? I would suggest it here. The eye should be lower and closer to the nose.

Some shading would help define the curves of the face. I do love your burn tecnique thought.
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Re: new

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:05 am

Ya know what, Steve - I'm calling a retraction of my earlier feedback.
Your Girl is fine and her eye is cool and interesting. I think I was just
being anal that day. Sorry!!! (But some shading would give her a little more depth)
'Best, E.
My favorite quote of the day;"What the Hell do I know, I'm only a critic!"
Steve, my feedback is always subject to change but I won't change my mind again.
Your burn series is interesting with just enough of a comic book feel to make
the subject and situation appear somewhat less horrible(?) than it actually is.
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Re: new

Postby Steve01982 » Sat Nov 17, 2012 5:16 pm

I added a bit to it
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Re: new

Postby Steve01982 » Sat Nov 17, 2012 5:48 pm

I have always enjoyed comics I guess that's where my "style" has come from I have only been working with ink of any kind for a few months. I just enjoy to put a pen, pencil, or whatever to paper and just let it go.
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Re: new

Postby Steve01982 » Sun Nov 18, 2012 3:51 am

whats with the word "horrible" what do you mean by that ?
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Re: new

Postby ehoeveler » Sun Nov 18, 2012 7:43 pm

Ooooh, I love what you've done
with the Ladies! Lol, when I use the word "horrible",
I'm saying that your subjects look pretty troubled,
that's all - not referring to the quality of your work
in any way. 'Best, E.
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Re: new

Postby sablewand » Mon Nov 19, 2012 5:20 pm

your work is stunning and very powerful! your images have a timeless quality about them. Beautiful!
~Every day that I am able to make my art, is a good day indeed~ DeVonna
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Re: new

Postby Steve01982 » Mon Nov 19, 2012 5:36 pm

Thank you so much !
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Postby tostra » Fri Nov 23, 2012 4:47 am

How big are they? I think they would have the best effect if they would be huge and even if they were the size of one comic box. Nice.
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Re: new

Postby Steve01982 » Fri Nov 23, 2012 8:20 am

I could make prints of them in any size
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Re: new

Postby eddieblz » Fri Nov 23, 2012 11:11 am

I liked this piece from the first time I saw it and I really like the additions you did to the original. You have a really unique style. I'm loving the imagery. Keep it up.
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Re: new

Postby Steve01982 » Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:12 am

thank you im glad you all enjoy
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Re: new

Postby jenn_iam » Mon Nov 26, 2012 2:21 pm

I like the overlay look... the burns make more sense with the sepia tones added to them. I also read the blank white spaces as the Shadow in a way (which oddly is opposite from the norm), which intrigues me.

Keep it up.
May your world be painted in the Brightest of colors!

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Re: new

Postby Steve01982 » Mon Nov 26, 2012 8:56 pm

i am happy that you like i love that my art is called different or out of the norm i love it
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