by ehoeveler » Sun Nov 04, 2012 5:03 pm
Your layering is fun but your main
character needs to be defined a lot
more and brought forward from the background.
Either that or fade the background a bit more.
I like the layout and the colors, as always!
Oh, I almost missed the sword - make that sucker
gleam - bring it out, OK?
Have a good week! E.