by ehoeveler » Thu Oct 11, 2012 10:32 pm
How funny that after seeing Joseph Kaplinsky's art, I'm treated
to a multi-level digital piece by Hex! While there are many layers to
this work your message is appealing and easy to read.
I would like to see more highlighting with the boy's pants or maybe a lighter color
because the bottoms just disappear into the overall picture. I think a little more
detailing is called for with the girl's boots, as well. Plus, I'm not sure about the
bars going through the bottoms of your subject's shoes.
And can I say just one more thing? The green binding around your figures is an
important part of this picture but while the color is great, the actual substance of
the binding seems weak, like you're not quite sure what to do with it.
I want to see that binding glow, clutch, grab, shackle and imprison the two kids
like the strong force I think you want it to be! Very cool and exciting. E.