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FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby Stephen Mitchell » Tue Sep 18, 2012 4:45 pm

THIS WAS THE SECOND PAINTING I EVER DID. (16 X 18) OIL PAINTING. JUST HAVIN FUN WITH IT. ENJOYED EVERY SECOND FOR SURE.
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I WANT THIS SOMEDAY... TODAY IS SOME DAY SO I GUESS TODAYS THE DAY.
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Re: FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby Erika Takacs » Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:35 am

That's really nice, especially for a second! Good sense of colour and composition.
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Re: FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:02 am

Agree with Erika on all points. One thing I'd like to add -
Maybe try a little more detail for the background trees?
I know you want it less defined but I'm thinking just a little...
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Re: FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby Stephen Mitchell » Thu Sep 20, 2012 6:37 pm

thank you. actully i had put the trees there and since it was my second painting i really didnt know what else to do. lol. ive worked out the kinks i feel.
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Re: FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby Artisit10 » Tue Sep 25, 2012 7:43 am

Nice Work dear. Try to refine the edges of river and trees in background.
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Re: FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby ehoeveler » Wed Sep 26, 2012 3:48 am

I keep looking at this work and I've
come to the conclusion that I was wrong -
You don't need to do another thing to this fresh style.
Y've been touched by the Almighty Brush - Have Funn!
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Re: FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby Stephen Mitchell » Fri Sep 28, 2012 6:29 pm

you are super sweet! thank you :) im getting down and painting a new one tonight.
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Re: FIRES IN THE SKY

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Sep 28, 2012 7:45 pm

Do it!!!! Yay!!!!!
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