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WARM SUNSET

Postby Stephen Mitchell » Tue Sep 18, 2012 5:02 pm

AS SOON AS I STARTED THIS ONE I FELT RIGHT ABOUT IT. KINDA CARTOON-ISH BUT I THINK THATS WHAT DRAWS ME IN. HAVE A GOOD ONE. :)
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I WANT THIS SOMEDAY... TODAY IS SOME DAY SO I GUESS TODAYS THE DAY.
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Re: WARM SUNSET

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:41 am

OK. Still pretty darned good. See if you can work on the cloud formations
by extending the cloud on the right - sort of looks like a question mark
as it is. I would like to see more blending of colors in the clouds and some more definition -
clouds tend to have ripples or shredding. Sometimes they can have a progression of puffy shapes,
know what I mean? Also, with the mountains I see a couple of hard lines that seem out of place.
Go ahead and mute those lines - darkness of the lines are more appropriate in a shaded spot
and those particular lines are in what seems to be a sunny, exposed area.
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Re: WARM SUNSET

Postby Stephen Mitchell » Thu Sep 20, 2012 6:41 pm

im lovin your advice. thnk you for takin the time to give it. :)
I WANT THIS SOMEDAY... TODAY IS SOME DAY SO I GUESS TODAYS THE DAY.
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Re: WARM SUNSET

Postby Artisit10 » Tue Sep 25, 2012 7:38 am

Great Picture, Nice Work.
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