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Postby rips10 » Fri Jun 01, 2007 7:21 am

Hellow every one again, see my new works and tell somting 'bout it
if u fill like to say.Rippy
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Postby Erika Takacs » Fri Jun 01, 2007 7:29 am

Rippy, that's a very nice piece, you're making progress with the bolder colours. And it's very emotionally expressive for a still life. To me it speaks about rebellion against confinement and a desire for freedom. Well done! Erika
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Postby ehoeveler » Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:33 pm

Good Job, Rip! E
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Postby rips10 » Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:17 am

Thanks to bothe da E,I am so glad to get complements from U.See da new one if u got time.Rippy :D
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Postby ehoeveler » Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:58 pm

Great perspective - what is that around the tree in the foreground?
Could you make that item a little clearer?
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Postby Erika Takacs » Sat Jun 02, 2007 7:59 pm

Wow, Rippy, you're so productive! Where do you find so much free time? I envy you. :)
I'm still admiring Unexpected Wind, it's a very strong and confident work, one that you come back to many times. I would say take everything from that work and try using it what you learned there and pushing it to the limit. I'd like to see more of this style.
The house doesn't look as confident and needs more contrast. The haziness is nice but I like it blended in more, like in Wind. Erika
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Postby rips10 » Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:32 am

Hi,thanks again.U no , My work is prospering only by ur discussions
n I'm so greatful to u.If I cud Iwud send u some gift.I come from mywork at 2.30 then I take lunch.After dat I have few studens at home to teach,Tye leav at 6.I do my paint work late night.I have to wakeup 6.30 in da morn.Some time I get tired but never fill like stop painting.So I don no how long I can go.Painting is my everything.See this one Rippy
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Postby ehoeveler » Mon Jun 04, 2007 3:29 am

I like everything about this one except - maybe just a touch
more blue in the sky? Good poses on the two workers.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Mon Jun 04, 2007 7:56 am

Rippy, I learned a lot too on this site and continue to. Your workers in the field is a lovely work, but I agree with Elizabeth, add stronger colours here and there. Also, it's not obvious what are they doing. Are t hey harvesting rice? Try to emphasize whatever they're doing. Touch it up and you'll have a very nice piece! Erika
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Postby rips10 » Wed Jun 06, 2007 8:39 am

I m trying my best.About two men .This is a very common scene of Banglades.they are reaping paddy.Here is resent one.Rippy
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Postby cameraman_2 » Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:25 am

oh wow I really like it
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Postby Singular » Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:33 am

Rippy,
I love the last one. It is beautiful and timeless.

all the best,
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Postby rips10 » Wed Jun 06, 2007 11:59 am

Thanks to u all .I might be progrssing.All credit is urs.I see ur gallery every day,Read comments and see gallery collctions.Thanks to A singular creation.Now I m little busy wid my office worke n u no family work but I never stop paintings.I wiil soon send more work.I wish to see some famou watercolor paintings.Can u help me.Wid qubism I am a failor I m afraid,but I'll try it again on my vacation.U no what wid watercolor it takes me only few hour to draw dats why I love water colore.Best regards to da forum.Rippy :D
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Postby Erika Takacs » Wed Jun 06, 2007 8:57 pm

Rippy, you did a lot of progress in my opinion. And don't abandon your cubist style paintings, they show a lot of promise and originality.
I found this really cool site about watercolour. There's a dropdown menu on top, you can choose names from there, some of the most famous masters included. Happy reading and come back when you have time, Erika

http://www.watercolorpainting.com/famous-artists.htm
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:26 pm

Rip, The 1st one needs more detail. And maybe some stronger color. The 2nd one needs a lot more color and details it,s very flat. The 3rd one needs a sky and a little more detal. The 4th one is what painting is all about. That one is very nice. If you lay all 4 side by side. I think you will see what a differnts color and detail can make.
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Postby ehoeveler » Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:54 am

I hate to jump off of the Love Train, here, but is the
waterline slanted on that 4th picture or is it my eyesight?
The picture itself is very beautiful. You Go, Rippy! E
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Postby rips10 » Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:42 am

Thanks everyone for seeing my painting.Erikia special thanks to u for keepsending me useful adds.I will start quibic anyway.I need some time.
In our country most of da artist practicing abstract.Thanks to all again Rippy
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