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Postby Cancer » Wed Oct 20, 2010 1:33 pm

Been working on this for a while. Hope its good, but lets hear what you have to say
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Postby Singular » Fri Oct 22, 2010 10:20 am

I think this is very good. The contrast is strong. However, everything seems to have the same value. With that being said, it lacks depth, making the focal point confusing. You have a lot of strong points. I would work on adding depth to the greenery and varying the strength of your objects a bit.

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Postby Danny Heim » Mon Jan 17, 2011 3:27 pm

I agree with Joe there, nice contrast until you hit the green background, a little more color variation inthe green would help. Otherwise very nice piece.
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