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Postby oilpainter2247 » Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:07 pm

this is a 24 by 36 oil on canvas ..........................i am still adding a bit more too this ..................but just like too no what you think of it so far ..............thank you all
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Postby Michael Ortega » Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:33 am

Another beautiful work from Michael. You should be working on 6 ft by 12 ft canvas'...selling to banks for their lobbies and such...Great job Mike...I think we need to re name this forum.... 8)
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Postby weirdpuckett » Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:36 am

I think that since the focal point is the roses in frgrnd that it makes the painting too symmetrical-if you were to beef up the contrast in the house it would offset this a bit and maybbee add some overlapping elements in mid ground..I personally see an old stone wall-it would
eak up the composition nicely . . .I love the greens :lol:
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:44 pm

Mike, Really like the colors in this one.
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Postby bpier » Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:24 am

Wow. This is very beautiful Michael, however, I do agree with Mike that there should maybe be a bit more contrast in the midground or the house. Wonderful work here.
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:43 am

michael i am so sorry it took me so long too reply ,,,,just been busy with things...............micahel thank you so very much for your comments .....i am looking in getting bigger ......................maybe in time .........thanks again mike have a wonderful day my friend .mike :D
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:46 am

hey mike yea the pic makes it look that way ,,,,,,,,,,,it is a bit blury in this . kind of makes the house look a bit differnt ............i will try and put up a new pic soon....thanks again mike :D
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:47 am

hey john ....................i am happy you like the colors in this one .........trying too put a bit more in my work as of late ............have a good one my friend .mike :D
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:49 am

hey Brian thanks so much for your comments too this one .............yea it is so much better then the pic here ........................have too get a new camera soon ..............Thanks again Brian :D
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Postby Phattasticle » Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:16 am

I wish I could paint this well. I can almost feel the warmth of the sun through the clouds. very nice
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Nice!

Postby rrsum » Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:19 pm

Nice work Mike! You're really getting good!
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Postby sablewand » Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:08 pm

All your hard work has paid off... this is wonderful, i love the colors, the path the barn. you have captured so much is this great picture...
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:20 am

Phattasticle thank you so very much for your nice comments on this . it means alot too me ..have a great day my friend .mike
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:22 am

Rich when you can say that about me it means alot........thanks so very much .mike
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:23 am

DeVonna it is nice too see you back around here ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thank you so much for your kind comment . you have a nice day and stay safe .mike
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Postby Erika Takacs » Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:57 am

Mike, this is an excellent work from you, you've reached a new level with the wonderful use of colour (more warm colours). I'm pretty amazed with it, if I wanted to be critical, which I don't, I'd say strech the flowers (poppies?) a bit more to the right, so they don't look dead in the centre.
To me it looks like dawn, it's fresh and crisp, I'd call it Poppy Morning. :)
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Fri Apr 02, 2010 12:52 am

hello Erika ,,,,,,,i am happy you came by too comment .................with the flowers there that might be a good idea about a bit more too the right .........have too look at it a bit more

Erika thank you again for your wonderful comments ..............have a great day .mike
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:30 am

Erika that is a good name for this and i am useing it now ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thank you for the new name poppy morning ......have a great day .mike
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Postby artisticsha » Sat Apr 17, 2010 6:02 am

Mike ,
This is absolutely goregous!! The flowers are striking. I hope you were not insulted by my comments about looking alike. (I did mean in colors) And I wasn't talking about all your work just the three. Great job.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Sat Apr 17, 2010 9:35 am

You're welcome, Mike. This is one of your best, I would love to hang it on my wall. :) it conveys positive feelings, and thoughts. Put a good price on it, Mike.
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