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This is a forum where you can post your art work and ask what the world thinks. I am looking for general feedback, nothing too technical. A push in the right direction would be appreciated.

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Postby TonyaRC123 » Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:00 pm

My second attempt. I think I rushed it :-(
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Postby Singular » Wed Feb 07, 2007 6:32 pm

The beauty of landscapes is that they are very easy to add to and change. I don't think you rushed it at all. It is very nice. Now that the majority is done, you can fine tune. I think that you may need to pay a bit of attention to the perspective of the
idge. It should be smaller and grow larger as it gets closer to us. It appears the same size to me. Perhaps a bit more detail in the shrubbery closest to us. Otherwise, this is a nice looking painting.

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Postby TonyaRC123 » Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:03 pm

I TOTALLY get what you are saying, though I didn't realize the perspective of the
idge was all wrong until you said that. lol I knew there was something I didn't like about this painting. I will definately keep that in mind next time. Thank you very much :-)
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Postby Erika Takacs » Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:45 pm

Hi Tonya,

Your painting made me forget for a moment that is freezing outside. Your trees are lovely, but like Joe said, you could work a little more on the perspective of the
idge, pathway, the water seems too still.

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Postby johnwalkeasy » Sat Feb 10, 2007 8:13 pm

Like the color in this work. The differnt shades of green works very well. And although the
idge could some work and maybe a few other details as talked about. The stone walkway is real nice
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Postby steven123 » Wed Feb 14, 2007 10:57 am

even if you think you rushed this piece, you've still managed to create some nice work, the colours are working well together
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