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Postby jaylewis718 » Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:10 am

the water needs a littel work but it came out great .....
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the water

Postby jimdlemons » Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:15 am

the woman looks watery too, I like it a very much. You style is very fluid.
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Postby jaylewis718 » Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:17 am

thats hot "your style is very fluid" 8) thanks for the comment jim..
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Postby jaylewis718 » Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:18 am

seductive with a mask on.....
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Postby xxbreezy » Fri Jul 11, 2008 7:57 am

Very nice work but I have to say in the first one...you forgot the "spot of white" in the ladies right eye. Otherwise, both are nicely done and your perception of what should be corrected is spot on.
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Postby nigelartist » Fri Jul 11, 2008 8:18 am

I prefer the lady on her back!

Then again I usually do! LOL
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Postby jaylewis718 » Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:29 pm

a lil tease
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Postby southerngirly » Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:48 pm

Very nice work! You have sex on the
ain LOL.
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Postby krysta11 » Sat Jul 12, 2008 5:50 pm

Hello Jay,
I really love every one you posted till now. Fantastic drawings. One suggestion only. The first one is my favorite but if you look again on her right eye you will see, it looks like she has a lump . I think if you darken a little bit same like left eye , this drawing will be perfect.
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HAHA

Postby nigelartist » Sat Jul 12, 2008 8:00 pm

You need to watch some BAD/GOOD porn films.
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Postby jaylewis718 » Sat Jul 12, 2008 10:11 pm

TASTE MY LOVE
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Postby Erika Takacs » Sat Jul 12, 2008 10:21 pm

No, Nigel. He needs to see Egon Schiele's works. In fact, here's a good link to his works: http://www.doc.ic.ac.uk/~svb/Schiele/
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Postby nigelartist » Sat Jul 12, 2008 10:48 pm

Erika Takacs wrote:No, Nigel. He needs to see Egon Schiele's works. In fact, here's a good link to his works: http://www.doc.ic.ac.uk/~svb/Schiele/


The subjects are all exhibitionists!

May or not
ought about by digested stimuli. LOL

I would MUCH rather look at Da Vinci's sketches.
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Postby jaylewis718 » Mon Jul 14, 2008 3:02 am

"touched by darkness"
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Postby krysta11 » Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:51 pm

It is mad!! I love all of them. The first one is perfect!
all the best Jay
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