roman street

[LeahW]

I'd like some constructive feedback on this painting. I'd appreciate any help I could get.
thanks,
leah[/img]

[bergina]

Make it bigger so I can see it.

[Singular]

I do wish the image was a bit larger. But from what I see, you did a very good job with the perspective and design. The color is also nice. However, the objects seem to compete a bit too much with each other due to the fact that you placed the same value for everything.

all the best,
Joe

[BAReam]

I really like the subject here. I would have to agree that the values are a bit too uniform, but tends to make the atmosphere very warm and inviting. The value issues might be counter balanced by intensely developing detail in the foreground.

All the best... BAReam

[rips10]

[quote="LeahW"]I'd like some constructive feedback on this painting. I'd appreciate any help I could get.
thanks,
leah[/img][/quote)
I think you should check the rightside(front building) of the drawing again,And distans should be little faded I mean not that vidual.Any way your work is very skilled work.Best of luck.

[Blayne]

Very beautiful! Since you obviously have kept strictly to the rules of perspective (good job!) check the vertical white line of the doorway to the right--it's angled a bit instead of straight vertical.

[Erika Takacs]

Very beautiful! Since you obviously have kept strictly to the rules of perspective (good job!) check the vertical white line of the doorway to the right--it's angled a bit instead of straight vertical.

I agree. It looks as though the building is about to collapse because of it. Other than that, it's very nice and colourful.

[candragon]

The colours are strong... liking the intensity of the blue sky Could maybe darken the foreground more to push the background away a bit. Its very well down and a strong piece. I like it.