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Postby johnwalkeasy » Thu Feb 21, 2008 8:10 pm

Portrait of a lady, 36"x36" Oil on alumimum, 2008
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The inability to achieve perfection is what creates a work of art.
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Postby Blayne » Fri Feb 22, 2008 5:41 pm

I love the colors in this. Only crit would be the white for the eyes and teeth seems a bit too white.
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Postby Singular » Fri Feb 22, 2008 6:48 pm

John, you are definitely improving. I remember your first attempt at a painting. You've come a long way. That being said, I agree that the teeth are a bit too pronounced. I also think that the size and spacing of the nose are a bit off.

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Postby Erika Takacs » Fri Feb 22, 2008 11:27 pm

John, very good job. I love what youd did with her shoulders and neck, and her face is nice. Somehow you preserved your John-style from your earlier works which is good, because it's so unique. Keep that if you can. The only drawback is the background. I'm not sure about the yellow tiles. They shift the focus off her face. Other than that, your hard work is paying off. Good for you.
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