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Woman in satin

Postby Cancer » Sun Jan 01, 2012 11:05 am

I been working on this peace for a while. Something is bothering me about it,however I cannot place my finger on the problem. Please feel free to comment and correct me where I went wrong. I still have to finish the table with the vase on behind her and did notice the mistake in her exposed arm.I still need to work on her hair and do the lighter parts on the satin sheet

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Re: Woman in satin

Postby nigelartist » Mon Jan 09, 2012 4:20 pm

I think the reflection in the mirror is not correctly reflecting the back of the woman's head. The mirror would have to be to the left of the woman as we look at her.

Beautiful colours though.
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Re: Woman in satin

Postby ehoeveler » Wed Apr 18, 2012 8:08 am

I'm liking many aspects of this painting, especially the colors
but the shading should be of a color that's a little more flattering to a woman.
Her face looks like she has a five-o'clock shadow and the placing of shade
in some areas look a bit off. Did you do this from your memory
or from looking directly at the subject?
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