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African Mother and Child

Postby Cancer » Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:09 am

I am busy with this one of a Himba Tribal woman and child. I have only been painting since December and this is only my 6th attempt. Please feel free to critique in order to improve. I still have to do all the detail like on the necklace of mother and baby, mother's hair, the shell round her neck ect. Any comments welcome and needed. I do want to enter it for a rather important competition.
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Postby BYart » Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:21 am

Hi!
I'm not sure of the medium?
What a wonderful painting! You are doing a great job! I'm sure you are as you said going to add a bit more detail...my suggestions would be to add mom's eyelashes, and perhaps a darker lip color, as if you are to leave it light, to me it's too distracting.
I am also a bit confused about the lighter
own area just to the left(our left) of child's body...is that the mother's arm? It seems a bit out of whack and i think you could leave it off as given the position of the baby and the crop of the image, I don't think we would see her arm anyway. Just suggestions...hope you don't mind.
I think you have done a great job, especially the child, and I cannot wait to see how you finish this off! Best of luck in your competition, this will surely rank high!
Barb

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After some more work

Postby Cancer » Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:56 am

After some more work on my Mother and child. Still not finished though. Still need to do the baby's necklace and some other minor details.
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Postby demac » Sun Jun 20, 2010 5:47 pm

this is beautifully done, one lesson i have learnt is if you are not happy with it start onother project, walk away for a while and then you will be touching it up as you see it differently in a different mood or light etc

Remember to step away go for a walk then come back its works a treat. Sometimes its disheartening when youi keep reworking it and it doesn't seem to go right. Don't give up, you have created a lovely piece of work.

Deanne :O)
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