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Postby demac » Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:59 pm

Help. I have gone wrong somewhere and I don't know where.

The two babies are from emailed photos but the girl and older boy are from a framed pic but the boy has a sullen face on him so I have tried to alter it to fit the rest of them but something is not right.

Any ideas on the young lad on the right?????????

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Postby johnwalkeasy » Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:27 pm

Deanne, I see two things that might help. #1, the nose looks to be a little small and baby like for a child this age. #2. The mouth looks like it might not be right where it should me. Ofcourse working on the nose may address that issue as well. And maybe a little darkness under the eyes may
ing out the age of this child. Boys of this age usely have that after baseball pratice look about them.
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Postby demac » Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:12 pm

Thanks John

I showed them the image and they love it without changes...go figure..so now in the framer

Practice practice Practice :O)
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:56 pm

I like this very much Deanne ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i love the eyes you did here ..............very nice work indeed.mike
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Postby nigelartist » Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:33 pm

Hi its nigelartist...long time no speak.

I think the picturein itself is beautiful...

Maybe the boy could be used as the focal point. He looks quite serious and mature tome...a kind of fatherly figure.

Great work again!
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Postby BYart » Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:40 pm

Hi Deanne!
So nice to see your work again! Very nice sketch here...keep them coming please!
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Postby ArtConsultant » Wed May 12, 2010 4:39 am

is a little off, but good start!
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Postby arlenemurals » Wed May 12, 2010 2:36 pm

the noses and general shapes of the heads are good, the irises in all the eyes are disprportionate to the heads and eyes themselves. The other thing I notice right away is the lack of mid tones. I think you have a very good start, keep going
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