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Any Suggestions to improve?

Postby paullorin » Fri Jun 08, 2018 12:42 pm

This is my 2nd attempt at painting the Matterhorn, this time on a 16 x20 ( 40.64 x50.8 ) traditional canvas. I would appreciate any thoughts or suggestions on ways to improve the light/shadow or any other aspect of the painting. Thank you all!
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Re: Any Suggestions to improve?

Postby Singular » Wed Jun 13, 2018 9:24 pm

Nice start. More detail to the objects in the foreground as opposed to the same detail to all objects, would give the painting a better sense of depth. Before I comment any further, I would like to see more progress on the painting.
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Re: Any Suggestions to improve?

Postby ArtByAyla » Fri Jun 15, 2018 8:27 pm

I love the color pallette so far. Hard to judge since you said it is a work in progress. I want you to be more brave with it and define those dark spots! Dark darks and light lights I think will add a lot to the depth of the piece!

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