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feedback? please dont be afraid to be brutal

Postby NexyNaya » Fri Feb 20, 2015 4:38 pm

this one took around 10 hours:

and this one took 30+ hours over several days
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Re: feedback? please dont be afraid to be brutal

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:36 pm

Quite a lusty scene of passion and domination in #1 - Drawing and colors nicely worked.
Next time put one of those women on the throne, LOL!
Your collection of interesting figures needs a little more cohesion - actually I think the background
workings are causing the break-up. There are 2 areas, far left, far right, where the imagery is too strong.
Those workings break up the rhythm in your foreground, imho. E
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Re: feedback? please dont be afraid to be brutal

Postby NexyNaya » Tue Feb 24, 2015 12:01 pm

Thanks :) I haven't really got the hang of using depth yet, I tend to do all features in the same amount of detail.
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