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Would like critique on my work

Postby ValdaMoon » Wed Nov 19, 2014 12:25 pm

As One xxx.jpg
"As One" Split canvas
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I would very much like to hear what others see in this piece, As One, or think about the it. It was created on a split canvas.
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Re: Would like critique on my work

Postby Singular » Wed Nov 19, 2014 8:12 pm

I like the aesthetic lines and overall composition. But it is really difficult to critique this as the image is very small and I cannot make out the detail. Could you upload a larger version?
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Re: Would like critique on my work

Postby ValdaMoon » Wed Nov 19, 2014 8:21 pm

Thank you for taking the time to view this piece. I cannot seem to load a larger file as the system will not allow it. My website shows a larger version. The link is listed in my profile. If you have the time, I would appreciate any comments!

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Re: Would like critique on my work

Postby Singular » Wed Nov 19, 2014 8:33 pm

Hi Heidi,

I went to your website and grabbed the image for you. I like the texture and flow. It is very nice. For giggles, I rotated the image 90 degrees counterclockwise and I love it. Try it to see what I mean.

all the best,
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Re: Would like critique on my work

Postby ValdaMoon » Wed Nov 19, 2014 8:46 pm

Hi Joe~
Yes! I have rotated this piece and separated them as well. I see Russian dolls when I do this!
How did you up load to this site from my sight? That would make my life a lot easier! :)

Thanks a bunch!
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Re: Would like critique on my work

Postby Singular » Wed Nov 19, 2014 9:13 pm

ValdaMoon wrote:Hi Joe~
Yes! I have rotated this piece and separated them as well. I see Russian dolls when I do this!
How did you up load to this site from my sight? That would make my life a lot easier! :)

Thanks a bunch!
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I actually had to get the image link through the source of the html code. Then I copied that image to an image editor. Your website does not make it easy to save images.
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Re: Would like critique on my work

Postby ValdaMoon » Wed Nov 19, 2014 9:22 pm

Would that not be the point?! :)

Thank you for your time, Joe!
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Re: Would like critique on my work

Postby Munjin » Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:58 am

Hi!It is certainly a work that catches the eye!I love how the pastel green brings out the red without interfering, also the shape is so organic and flowing! It reminds me of a womb, or the splitting of the cells, but it is definitely connected to nature. Also, for some reason Frida Kahlo popped into my mind. specifically of her painting entitled Moses and maybe her still lives with all the fruit. It has the same vibrancy and the strong colours.Keep it up!Peace!:)
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