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Postby camerashy » Thu Jun 07, 2007 3:30 pm

More I wonder are okay or not?
and if so which is best?
thanks
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:18 pm

The 2nd is the best. The bench and trees in the background give the photo a good feel. I like the pose in this one. The 1st one is a little to girlish. The 3rd one is petty good. The pose is okay.
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Postby JayRoler » Fri Jun 08, 2007 4:52 am

the first gets my vote.

i love B&W photos and there are so many shapes of light almost dancing thru out the photo. it looks natural as if you captured a moment and doesnt look posed.

as for the second two, they look too posed and "average".

but that first one strikes a chord with shapes of light reflecting off of a human form. love it!
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Postby Singular » Fri Jun 08, 2007 10:13 am

I definitely like the first the best. The point of view is very good and the perspective adds a lot of interest. I think it is very well done. The third is pretty good as well. The second is a bit too premeditated for me.

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Postby camerashy » Fri Jun 08, 2007 11:24 am

Thank you!,
it does help to get replies.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Fri Jun 08, 2007 12:31 pm

They all look staged to me, but the first one definitely has artistic merit to it. The other two are photos of a naked guy. Try to take more natural photos. Black and white seems to work better for you. Good luck, Erika
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Postby ehoeveler » Sat Jun 09, 2007 3:49 am

Where's the work? E
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