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Postby eddieblz » Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:23 pm

Here's one possibility.
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Re: I Tree

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:42 pm

If and only if you make the background colors lighter and more delicate. Also, the planets' position and coloring compete
with your foreground images. I say, tone down that color and position the large planet directly behind the main eye and get rid of the smaller planet or move it downwards. Thank You, E
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Re: I Tree

Postby eddieblz » Tue Jun 24, 2014 10:44 am

Well how about this?
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Re: I Tree

Postby Gosia » Tue Jun 24, 2014 12:23 pm

I think the second option is much better! With this background it looks even more amazing than before. :-)
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Re: I Tree

Postby ehoeveler » Tue Jun 24, 2014 4:52 pm

No, I like the orange but just make it lighter and get rid of one of those planets.
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Re: I Tree

Postby eddieblz » Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:31 pm

OKAY MAMA E....
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Re: I Tree

Postby Medved35 » Tue Jun 24, 2014 9:52 pm

Great stuff Eddie! Really like the line work with those trees. Initially, that strong contrast with the first one turned me off but it grew on me and I'm actually enjoying it now.
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Re: I Tree

Postby eddieblz » Wed Jun 25, 2014 10:57 am

another............
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Re: I Tree

Postby ehoeveler » Wed Jun 25, 2014 4:11 pm

Eddie, Darling - why do you want have your background images compete
with the delightful Bird and Eyeballs? Try this just for me...get rid of the bottom
cloud(?) action, lose the two smaller planets and bring down that big planet so it surrounds
the main eyeball. Then, make the background one or two shades lighter. Try it and
see how you like it, OK? E
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