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Postby 8bats » Thu May 31, 2007 4:21 pm

I'm looking for a little constructive criticism on my photos. My intention is to convey emotion with the use of simple compostion and color.
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Postby Singular » Thu May 31, 2007 4:48 pm

Hello there,
The composition on the bottom image is nice, but the color is somewhat lifeless. The first image, on the other hand is a winner. Very nice. The color in the background is a beautiful compliment to the stone. The color reflecting off the sculpture and the little bits of pink on textured areas of the sculpture are a very subtle, but nice touch.

all the best,
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Postby ehoeveler » Fri Jun 01, 2007 3:30 am

Agree. I do like that you picked a cherub with
the stone wearing away around the neck.
(Angels don't always have it easy!)
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Postby Erika Takacs » Fri Jun 01, 2007 7:22 am

I like them both. It looks like blood around the exposed wire, he's wounded. I personally like the cherub better. Maybe play around a little more with colours for best effect. Erika
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