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My first still life in acrylic.

Postby nocliche » Thu Dec 05, 2013 9:36 am

Let me know what you think!
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Re: My first still life in acrylic.

Postby nigelartist » Thu Dec 05, 2013 2:46 pm

Great colours but could you photo the image square on so as to get a better understanding of the artwork?

Nice artwork.

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Re: My first still life in acrylic.

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Dec 05, 2013 6:28 pm

I think this is an excellent start but with glasses and bottles you need to be a tad more precise in the drawing. You're very close to doing that but not quite there. Thank You, E
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Re: My first still life in acrylic.

Postby nocliche » Sat Dec 07, 2013 7:17 am

Thank you and I agree on all the points. Will submit a square photo. Next still life will be a bit neater and exact.
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Re: My first still life in acrylic.

Postby Frank Joseph » Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:22 am

Hello, very nice your first attempt at still life in acrylic. In addition to the advice you have received, I would add another one, with the idea to help you enrich your work. Please, it would be nice if you try to differentiate more the lights and shadows. I also see that in the illuminated bottle and glass parts have you used a white color, it would be very convenient if these bright colors you add another touch of another color in some parts. For example, in the bottom of the cup would be good that you put some touch of those beautiful red that are surrounding the elements, which remain colored light illuminated, but not only white. Nice job.
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Re: My first still life in acrylic.

Postby nocliche » Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:42 am

Got you and agreed. Thank you for tye clear and useful advice
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Re: My first still life in acrylic.

Postby jenn_iam » Thu Jan 16, 2014 3:45 pm

Really good for 1st try with acrylics. Think some more dramatic shadows would make your subjects pop more however. Keep it up!
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