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Another Oil Painting!

Postby Denny » Tue Jul 02, 2013 3:44 pm

Abstract!
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Re: Another Oil Painting!

Postby ehoeveler » Tue Jul 02, 2013 6:37 pm

Your flow is full of action and from what I can see the colors look OK.
I do see lots of paint bumps - you should take an exacto knife or one-sided
razor to get those off. I still think more needs to be happening with your painting.
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Re: Another Oil Painting!

Postby rhknigh » Tue Jul 02, 2013 7:07 pm

If I were to hang this I would do so with the red side up. Then, to me it would resemble a seascape with a red sky. I really like this, less is sometimes more. You got it.
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Re: Another Oil Painting!

Postby Denny » Tue Jul 02, 2013 8:50 pm

Thank you for your compliments, and suggestions! I try to use the color format of gerhard richter as much as possible. I am working on it! Thank you for the tip with the paint bumps, as im still trying to decide if they belong in my paintings or not!

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Re: Another Oil Painting!

Postby ehoeveler » Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:47 am

Cut 'em - they're distracting.
There will be a little hole when you take off the bump
so be real careful when you do this because you don't want
to end up with a huge hole..
When you finish, put a thin layer of color over the spot (the darker
the better) and no one should notice. E
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Re: Another Oil Painting!

Postby Denny » Wed Jul 03, 2013 6:39 am

Thanks for the information E

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Re: Another Oil Painting!

Postby chinujhon » Tue Jul 30, 2013 6:01 am

I like it.. Its an abstract art. I like the way you paint.
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