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Another tornado

Postby Marley » Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:33 am

Hi again ......This is an older tornado I tried.
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Re: Another tornado

Postby Marley » Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:14 am

Oh, Ok! :-)
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Re: Another tornado

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:54 pm

Hi, Marlene! I love your coloring, action and brushstrokes
but this tornado looks almost like a gift from above
or is the 'above' taking this tornado back?
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Re: Another tornado

Postby Marley » Mon Jun 10, 2013 6:33 pm

Good question E. I haven't a clue lol!
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Re: Another tornado

Postby Singular » Mon Jun 10, 2013 7:02 pm

I like the action. But perhaps a bit too contained and clean. Let it rip! Overall, nicely done.
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Re: Another tornado

Postby nigelartist » Thu Jun 13, 2013 2:03 pm

Rather calm looking overall to me considering there is a tornado loose. Try putting some more angst into the work please.
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Re: Another tornado

Postby Denny » Tue Jul 02, 2013 3:35 pm

I really like the negative space, its shape is very appealing!

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