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New guy needs Feedback

Postby TwistedNitWit » Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:23 pm

So I've been working on this piece for almost a week and I need to know what you all think of it thus far, take it apart and help me improve.
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby Singular » Thu Apr 11, 2013 7:31 am

Hi there. Can you tell us a bit more. I assume this is digital, right? What software are you using?
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby TwistedNitWit » Thu Apr 11, 2013 12:07 pm

Photoshop and a Wacom Tablet.
It is for a class and we used this brainstorming program that gives you random three words a scenario, a place, and things to do/use. Mine was Healing Journey, Deserted, and Shield. So I came up with a story arc for those three words.

The story behind this one is that the universe is no longer being made naturally and is instead created by higher beings that we call gods. Since the Universe is constantly expanding they can't be everywhere at once so they choose beings from different parts of the universe to be their tools to rebuild, create and destroy worlds for a 1000 year period. That is where this character comes in, he was chosen and becomes their agent, and is one another world to rebuild.

I left out the special effects and the portal he emerges from to get some cosmetic feedback on the piece before coloring and adding special effects. which is why his right hand is extended outwards, that's where his power comes from his hands.
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Apr 11, 2013 2:48 pm

I'm waiting for the final but I have a good feeling about it.
I love the 'leaf'-board. Thank You, Ehoeveler
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby nigelartist » Fri Apr 12, 2013 11:02 am

Yes the artwork looks fun so far. I look forward to colours being added.

Keep up the good work.
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby rhknigh » Fri Apr 12, 2013 8:39 pm

That is neat. I was thinking it was some kind of hover board. Sounds like he will be a very special character. Looking forward to seeing the rest of your idea unfold.
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby TwistedNitWit » Sat Apr 13, 2013 4:29 pm

Today is the day I finish this project. I'll reveal it later today!
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Apr 13, 2013 5:30 pm

We're waiting...
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby TwistedNitWit » Sat Apr 13, 2013 10:38 pm

Here it is folks, finally done (or is it?) and here for you to see. I need some feedback please.
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby ehoeveler » Sun Apr 14, 2013 4:53 pm

This color takes it to a newer, cooler level.
Stars are a fabulous addition. Thank You, E
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Re: New guy needs Feedback

Postby nigelartist » Mon Apr 15, 2013 11:10 am

Sorry to contradict but I don't like the stars. I think they get in the way. I also think the face is a bit gormless looking.

On the positive, nice colours and nice design.
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